Hello Don. I'm stuck between being flattered by your comments, and annoyed that you have not passed on some of your experience.
The first one has a few hotspots, and I would like to control those a bit more. There's also some loss of detail over part of the dial. So I think there is room for improvement. I photographed the dial of the modern watch, and the results were poor. Part of the problem is cleaning the surfaces. How do you clean your cameras, especially the polished metal? You always seem to get such good results.
Leif