William,
What's the subject of the portfolio? It will help peple to judge how effectively you've fulfilled the brief if they know what the brief is.
Also, attaching the images as robski has done will mean more people can see them. I'm at work (at lunch) at the moment and our company firewall is blocking access to your links. Because of this, I cannot view them or critique with the urgency you require.
Please read and follow the "sticky" post at the top of the critique forum to get the best response to your request.
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