Hi
Firstly i think its very clever what you have done but i didnt find it exciting to watch. The little white plasticine character running around at the beginning is just too small and far away to really appreciate and when he is supposed to be the point of focus its a shame. I dont like the Idea thing going on with the pin board, that was just lost on me and boring. Again i like the characters messing about around the computer monitor later on but again they are far too small or far away to appreciate. I think it was a lovely touch when the hand comes in and takes the image on the mac screen away.
Overall it was nice but too dark and therefore the vivid colour in things like the post-its were just not vivid enough to stand out. I think i should have been enthralled and i wasnt. Sorry to be so hard but its honest as you asked for.
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