Don,
Thanks for those good words of encouragement. Sarah and I have spent ages squinting at the screen trying to decide exactly what that reflection actually is...
Providing the screen grab from Nikon Capture helped us all see what the lights looked like in detail. Eventually we decided that the lights were the flash pointed upward with flash output at the top of the pupil (black thing
in eye) and a flash output leak (from the hinge) in the middle of the pupil. The black rectangle is the top adjustable part of the flash head.
I agree the eyes do look quite odd, I could clone or PS something to improve but I prefer to get the image correct first then use PS simply to finish or enhance the photo.
Any homemade tips on how I can improve the catch lights in James's eyes?