Ups & Downs time...
Up - watching windmills windmilling - I liked the idea of this shot but for me there is too much blank space. I think I'd have been tempted to focus on the family on the bench and the windmills in their immediate vicinity.
Down - Mist morn - somehow my eye keeps flitting between the ironwork on the left & the buildings in the background on the right. I wonder if moving to the right & shooting looking over the sea with the ironwork scroll on the right hand third might have produced a stronger image.
As always - JMHO guys
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